Hey... Im doing a comparesion essay for my english cl. I was wondering if you guys could proof read it.?

Seriously?? There's so many things wrong with this essay. Take this, copy and past it into Microsoft Word and if it doesn't start to bleed red with errors then hit the Spell Checker on. You can't see all the words meshed in together? Too easy to fix since it is blatantly staring you in the face.